bunny_duen

这篇文真的很棒。B的变化虽大点却铺陈合理，每个角色都没忽略。希望有人翻完它。

bunny_duen

楼主妹妹，要不您接着611继续翻怎么样？就当可怜可怜偶棉英语小白吧。em07

bunny_duen

jill答应了要来翻的！em11

bunny_duen

jill大：坛子重开时数据丢失过，现在这文当中缺了一段，612-613上都没有，是不是考虑补贴一下？

bunny_duen

今天坑坑很勤劳喔！:s33

但是，还是要说：快去填你自己的坑！！！！！！！！！！:s42

bunny_duen

又有更新，太好了！:s14

结尾的曙光就在前面。:s12

bunny_duen

完结文沙发！！:s17 :s31

大人那么多天没上来，一上就把完结的贴出来。:s14 :s47
这文偶等了太久了，终于完结，偶太激动鸟！！:s03
据说有S7了，大人会翻吗？:s12

H部分不翻译了，请自行解决----------:s30 :s09 :s44

[ 本帖最后由 bunny_duen 于 2007-12-2 23:28 编辑 ]

bunny_duen

建议将标题改为“完结”，不然容易让人觉得是坑。

bunny_duen

今天又把这文看了一遍，想起jill之前说对本文的走向有些担心的话，现在觉得确实有点怪，人物表现有些过了，个个都成功又幸福，B大也太甜了点，说不清楚。

bunny_duen

有中文H实在是太好了:s21 :s03

bunny_duen

原帖由 island1323 于 2008-2-18 12:41 发表
我想我一定是瞎了:s37
因为你们都说612还有一段没翻
可是我没看到啊
谁来告诉我到底在哪里
还是直接复制下来记短消息给我:s47

Jill在612中文里只写了一句“*********非清水部分，不知道贴哪里好********”，难怪小凹找不到。
612的原文大概在381楼，没翻的好象是这段，小凹对照看看：

He nuzzled against Brian’s crotch, taking in the scent of him before slowly licking along the underside of Brian’s cock. It was already semi hard and with in seconds Brian was fully erect. Justin began gently sucking the tip before taking hold of the shaft and working Brian’s dick deep into his mouth. It wasn’t until Justin started to swallow around Brian’s cock that he began to stir. Brian pulled the covers back and watched Justin suck him then he reached down to lace his fingers through Justin’s hair in an effort to urge him on.
Brian moaned when Justin slicked his hand with spit and began massaging his balls.  When Justin stopped and looked up, Brian licked his lips and in a throaty, morning voice he said, “Come up here.” Justin let Brian’s cock slip from between his lips. He inched his way up Brian’s side, planting kisses on his chest along the way. Justin needed to feel Brian inside him. So he teased Brian’s lips with his tongue before rolling over on his stomach.
The sight of Justin’s bare ass made Brian’s cock leak and he hurried to put on the condom so he could feel Justin’s tight hole pulsate around him. Once inside, he thrust himself deep into Justin. He pace was quick and deliberate and as he rolled his hips to draw his cock back and forth along Justin’s prostate he could feel the beads of sweat fall from his forehead onto Justin’s back. It wasn’t long before Justin was shuddering beneath him. And after Brian came himself, he rolled on to his side and smiled, “You can wake me up like that everyday for the rest of our lives if you’d like.”
Justin patted Brian’s shoulder, “Daily wake-up blow jobs? I think that can be arranged, assuming of course you continue to ram my ass that way every morning.”

[ 本帖最后由 bunny_duen 于 2008-2-18 18:30 编辑 ]

bunny_duen

完整了完整了，幸福啊:s41